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| | <br>“I ain’t missing that game again”, I told him. After all, there friend, not me, were at the game and their wasn't no way I was going to miss it. | | <br>“I ain’t missing that game again”, I told him. After all, there friend, not me, were at the game and their wasn't no way I was going to miss it. |
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| − | :"I am not missing that game again", I told him. After all, their friend, not me, was at the game and there was no way I was going to miss it. | + | :"I am not missing that game again", I told him. After all, their friend was at the game, and there was no way I was going to miss it. |
| | <br>When a stranger showed up sought directons, I told them to not to bother me and my friend. | | <br>When a stranger showed up sought directons, I told them to not to bother me and my friend. |
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| − | :When a stranger showed up seeking directions, I told him not to bother my friend and me. | + | :When a stranger showed up seeking directions, I told him not to bother me or my friend. |
| | <br>Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year. The Packers, lets admit was the finest players. Just joking ..... no one around hear doubt that the Giants are the most greatest ever! | | <br>Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year. The Packers, lets admit was the finest players. Just joking ..... no one around hear doubt that the Giants are the most greatest ever! |
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| − | :Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year. The Packers, let's admit, were the finest players. Just joking...... no one around here doubts that the Giants are the greatest ever! | + | :Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year. The Packers, let's admit, are the finest players. Just joking...... no one around here doubts that the Giants are the greatest ever! |
| | <br>All the mistakes in this will be cought by I this time. Does you think this work are something to be embarassed about | | <br>All the mistakes in this will be cought by I this time. Does you think this work are something to be embarassed about |
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