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*I changed many of the words around, in what I added, and submit, once again, let's see you write it, without using many of the same words as descriptors, eh? Criticism, without offering a solution, other than removing the article, and trying to make this place look bad is unacceptable behavior. If you claim you are here to help, do so. --~ [[User:TK|TK]] <sup>[[User_talk:TK|MyTalk]]</sup> 18:36, 9 April 2007 (EDT)
*I changed many of the words around, in what I added, and submit, once again, let's see you write it, without using many of the same words as descriptors, eh? Criticism, without offering a solution, other than removing the article, and trying to make this place look bad is unacceptable behavior. If you claim you are here to help, do so. --~ [[User:TK|TK]] <sup>[[User_talk:TK|MyTalk]]</sup> 18:36, 9 April 2007 (EDT)
:This sentence is word for word from the Register article: “Johnson, the 31-year-old son of a Cedar Rapids chiropractor, showed a practitioner’s patience — at least on the surface — through difficult conditions throughout the four rounds of play.” This sentence is word for word from the Register article: “No player from Iowa had finished in the top 10 of a Masters, with the highest finish being a tie for 11th by Davenport’s Jack Fleck in 1962.” This sentence is word for word from the Register article, except the typo (hold for hole) has been fixed: “Fleck is the only other Iowan to win a major championship, beating Ben Hogan in an 18-hole playoff at the 1955 U.S. Open.” --[[User:Reginod|Reginod]] 18:37, 9 April 2007 (EDT)
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