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| | God given rights belong to all of us, other than us, whom else would he give them to? | | God given rights belong to all of us, other than us, whom else would he give them to? |
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| | + | :Need hyphen: "God-given". Also, "to whom else ..." Minus 1. |
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| | “I [am not] missing that game again”, I told him. After all, their friend was at the game and there was no way I was going to miss it. | | “I [am not] missing that game again”, I told him. After all, their friend was at the game and there was no way I was going to miss it. |
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| | + | :OK. |
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| | When a stranger came and sought directions, I told him to not to bother my friend and me. | | When a stranger came and sought directions, I told him to not to bother my friend and me. |
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| | + | :Good. |
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| | Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year. The Packers, admittedly were the finest players. Just joking-nobody around here doubts that the Giants are the greatest team ever! | | Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year. The Packers, admittedly were the finest players. Just joking-nobody around here doubts that the Giants are the greatest team ever! |
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| | + | :Good. |
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| | All the mistakes in this will be caught by me this time. Do you think this work is something to be embarrassed about? | | All the mistakes in this will be caught by me this time. Do you think this work is something to be embarrassed about? |
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| | + | :Good again. |
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| | James is most proud of the homework that had the fewest errors, of course! The final sentence, and the one before it; they were perfect. | | James is most proud of the homework that had the fewest errors, of course! The final sentence, and the one before it; they were perfect. |
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| | + | :A colon rather than a semicolon near the end. Minus 1. |
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| | + | :58/60. Good work.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 09:50, 16 February 2012 (EST) |
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| | Handed essay in at class | | Handed essay in at class |
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| | + | :OK. |
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| | AranM | | AranM |