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→Sentence fragment in first paragraph: new section
To be honest, the formatting on this article is utterly horrible. They is potential for using better prose and more consise language. Another this is that {{tl|cite}}, etc. should be used for the article. I plan on getting this done sometime soon, when I have the time to do so. [[User:GregoryZ|GregoryZ]] 22:20, 29 July 2010 (EDT)
To be honest, the formatting on this article is utterly horrible. They is potential for using better prose and more consise language. Another this is that {{tl|cite}}, etc. should be used for the article. I plan on getting this done sometime soon, when I have the time to do so. [[User:GregoryZ|GregoryZ]] 22:20, 29 July 2010 (EDT)
== Sentence fragment in first paragraph ==
The last sentence in the first paragraph seems to be a sentence fragment. I would fix it but I'm not sure what the original editor's intent was. --[[User:Dfrischknecht|Dfrischknecht]] 16:16, 22 March 2012 (EDT)