:Terrific essay on substance: 9.8. On technical points, some room for improvement, especially in punctuation: 9.5.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 10:16, 16 February 2012 (EST) | :Terrific essay on substance: 9.8. On technical points, some room for improvement, especially in punctuation: 9.5.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 10:16, 16 February 2012 (EST) |