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I just wanted to point out a few typos in this page, because it is linked to on the front page. In the second sentence, "'''cummulatively,'''" should be "'''cumulatively'''" if I'm not mistaken. Also, in the first section after the Table of Contents, "'''In June of 2011, Shockofgoddeclared'''" should have a space before "'''declared'''." That's all I can find at the moment; please let me know if there is anything else I can do. Thank you! [[User:KevinDavis|Kevin Davis]] <sup>[[User talk:KevinDavis|Talk]]</sup> 20:35, 30 November 2011 (EST)
 
I just wanted to point out a few typos in this page, because it is linked to on the front page. In the second sentence, "'''cummulatively,'''" should be "'''cumulatively'''" if I'm not mistaken. Also, in the first section after the Table of Contents, "'''In June of 2011, Shockofgoddeclared'''" should have a space before "'''declared'''." That's all I can find at the moment; please let me know if there is anything else I can do. Thank you! [[User:KevinDavis|Kevin Davis]] <sup>[[User talk:KevinDavis|Talk]]</sup> 20:35, 30 November 2011 (EST)
 
:Hi everyone. Could someone please address the aforementioned copy-editing mistakes? Thank you! [[User:KevinDavis|Kevin Davis]] <sup>[[User talk:KevinDavis|Talk]]</sup> 10:49, 2 December 2011 (EST)
 
:Hi everyone. Could someone please address the aforementioned copy-editing mistakes? Thank you! [[User:KevinDavis|Kevin Davis]] <sup>[[User talk:KevinDavis|Talk]]</sup> 10:49, 2 December 2011 (EST)
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::These typos have been left uncorrected for over 6 months, as Kevin pointed out. Can an admin please fix them? :) [[User:CWest|CWest]] 14:55, 7 June 2012 (EDT)
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==Word to substance ratio==
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The definition of the word [https://www.google.com/search?hl=en&safe=active&q=accurate+definition accurate] includes the word "correct" in it. Therefore, the word-to-substance ratio of Shockofgod's request for "proof and evidence that [[atheism]] is accurate and correct" could be improved if the words "and correct" were omitted. [[User:CWest|CWest]] 14:55, 7 June 2012 (EDT)
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