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|Woe unto you that are full! for ye shall hunger. Woe unto you that laugh now! for ye shall mourn and weep.
 
|Woe unto you that are full! for ye shall hunger. Woe unto you that laugh now! for ye shall mourn and weep.
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|Grief to those who are content!  You shall be unsatisfied.  Grief to you who party now!  You shall mourn and weep.
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|Grief to you who are content!  You shall be unsatisfied.  Grief to you who party now!  You shall mourn and weep.
 
|οὐαί: "grief"; πενθέω is "mourn" and κλαίω is "weep", and both are used.  Need improvement on "those who are content," and an issue about translating γελάω as "party" rather than "laugh"
 
|οὐαί: "grief"; πενθέω is "mourn" and κλαίω is "weep", and both are used.  Need improvement on "those who are content," and an issue about translating γελάω as "party" rather than "laugh"
 
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|Woe unto you, when all men shall speak well of you! for so did their fathers to the false prophets.
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|Grief to you, when all men shall speak well of you! for so did their fathers to the false prophets.
 
|You shall suffer, those whom men praise now!  Their fathers did likewise for the false prophets.
 
|You shall suffer, those whom men praise now!  Their fathers did likewise for the false prophets.
 
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