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* Birth: I removed an opening sentence about Obama eating dog meat. It looks really silly there, starting off the section. Maybe the article could be linked somewhere else but it looks really bad starting off the page like that.
 
* Birth: I removed an opening sentence about Obama eating dog meat. It looks really silly there, starting off the section. Maybe the article could be linked somewhere else but it looks really bad starting off the page like that.
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* Early Life: I included a whole new section on his early life and family and removed some unsourced claims that he was the antichrist and will be instating police rule (which either way doesn't fit the section).
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* Early Life: I included a whole new section on his early life and family and removed some unsourced claims that he was the antichrist and will be instating police rule (which either way doesn't fit the section). If it's going to be put anywhere in the article an appropriate subsection should be created for it, and some sourcing provided - neither of which was the case before.
 
* Personal Life: I added a whole new section on his marriage to Michelle Obama, children, and church.
 
* Personal Life: I added a whole new section on his marriage to Michelle Obama, children, and church.
 
* Education: I added a new section on education. Some of it was alluded to earlier but didn't have sources, my material does.
 
* Education: I added a new section on education. Some of it was alluded to earlier but didn't have sources, my material does.
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