Talk:Albury

Take a breath. Start again. Check your spelling, grammar etc. before uploading.

In this particular case - an Australian town - tell them where it is. Not just NSW but where in NSW. (It is not Dubbo. Or Maitland after all.) What's it's importance. When was it founded and by whom. Who is it named after. Mention Wodonga. Mention the change in rail gauges. (If you're really clever you can boor them with the story of each state's insistence of having its own rail gauge - that, however, would need to be another article.

Are you getting the drift?

Most of all, don't reference wikipedia. Not here. CP doesn't like wikipedia.

You will notice I left you with a red link. I try not to leave them around. Perhaps at some stage you can write an article on the Murray River.

I can be a pain in the arse but my heart's in the right place. I'm at alan.carvel@gmail if you want to a yarn.

AlanE (talk) 01:28, 2 May 2016 (EDT)

Okay. Thankyou very much. I was trying to make this page from a mobile device with bad internet - I'll try and fix up the page with your hints when I can get the time. Restofyour (talk) 19:40, 2 May 2016 (EDT)