Difference between revisions of "Talk:Comprehension gap"
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If it doesn't fit well, replace with a better example. Personally, I thought the use in the sentence was weaker. You removed the disclaimer and the category, fine.--[[Image:50 star flag.png|14px]] [[User:Jpatt|jp]] 15:27, 18 September 2008 (EDT) | If it doesn't fit well, replace with a better example. Personally, I thought the use in the sentence was weaker. You removed the disclaimer and the category, fine.--[[Image:50 star flag.png|14px]] [[User:Jpatt|jp]] 15:27, 18 September 2008 (EDT) | ||
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| + | :I think part of the problem comes from the fact that this term only seems to come up on blogs or other semi-news websites. | ||
| + | :I reread the article a few more times, though, and I think you are right that the use in the sentence is weaker than the example, especially since the sentence comes from a comment on a post and not a real source. However, a noncontroversial and less preachy example is always better. I'll root around some more on the Net and see if I can come up with soemthing better. [[User:HelpJazz|Help]][[User talk:HelpJazz|Jazz]] 16:02, 18 September 2008 (EDT) | ||
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Is the abortion example really necessary? It's somewhat convoluted and comes off more as another venue to speak against abortion than as a clear example of a comprehension gap. HelpJazz 14:07, 18 September 2008 (EDT)
If it doesn't fit well, replace with a better example. Personally, I thought the use in the sentence was weaker. You removed the disclaimer and the category, fine.--
jp 15:27, 18 September 2008 (EDT)
- I think part of the problem comes from the fact that this term only seems to come up on blogs or other semi-news websites.
- I reread the article a few more times, though, and I think you are right that the use in the sentence is weaker than the example, especially since the sentence comes from a comment on a post and not a real source. However, a noncontroversial and less preachy example is always better. I'll root around some more on the Net and see if I can come up with soemthing better. HelpJazz 16:02, 18 September 2008 (EDT)