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:Hi Kevin, thanks for turning my attention to this error.

:Is this essay understandable enough or should I explain certain things more? [[User:JimJast|JimJast]] 13:36, 5 September 2011 (EDT)

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::I see numerous grammatical and structural changes that I would make in order to make the essay more readable and similar to an article (and less a personal work), but since it ''is'' an essay, I don't think it's a problem. As for the content, I'm absolutely no physicist, so I can't analyze that portion of the content, unfortunately. [[User:KevinDavis|KevinDavis]] <sup>[[User talk:KevinDavis|Talk]]</sup> 16:06, 5 September 2011 (EDT)

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