[[User:Pachyderm|Pachyderm]] 10:41, 31 August 2007 (EDT)
[[User:Pachyderm|Pachyderm]] 10:41, 31 August 2007 (EDT)
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==Re-write Opening Sentence==
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"In less than the past 100 years, Communism has claimed more than 100 million lives. Today, it continues to enslave one-fifth of the world's people."
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That may be true, but shouldn't the introductory sentence actually tell us something? Shouldn't it say who created the concepts of Communism? Shouldn't it at least mention Marx? --[[User:Goldstein|Goldstein]] 23:29, 1 September 2007 (EDT)