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Generally agreed.
Shouldn't the saying be "all ''the'' above"? [[User:Human|Human]] 17:05, 29 August 2008 (EDT)
Shouldn't the saying be "all ''the'' above"? [[User:Human|Human]] 17:05, 29 August 2008 (EDT)
:That seems to be the smallest of this article's problems. Anyone want to rewrite it in something more closely resembling English? [[User:Human|Human]] 17:08, 29 August 2008 (EDT)
:That seems to be the smallest of this article's problems. Anyone want to rewrite it in something more closely resembling English? [[User:Human|Human]] 17:08, 29 August 2008 (EDT)
::It seems to be "all ''of the'' above", actually. And while I think your last remark went a bit far, this article '''does''' need some rewriting. Aside from some grammar, there is also unnecessary opinion-pushing in the middle, and the article seems to be a collection of random ideas. I'll see if I can dig out some sources (this isn't really my special field) later today or tomorrow. But if others want to fix this sooner, be my guest. Do we have some sort of "Needs work plz" template? --[[User:DirkB|DirkB]] 17:16, 29 August 2008 (EDT)