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God given rights belong to all of us, other than us, whom else would he give them to? | God given rights belong to all of us, other than us, whom else would he give them to? | ||
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| + | :Need hyphen: "God-given". Also, "to whom else ..." Minus 1. | ||
“I [am not] missing that game again”, I told him. After all, their friend was at the game and there was no way I was going to miss it. | “I [am not] missing that game again”, I told him. After all, their friend was at the game and there was no way I was going to miss it. | ||
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| + | :OK. | ||
When a stranger came and sought directions, I told him to not to bother my friend and me. | When a stranger came and sought directions, I told him to not to bother my friend and me. | ||
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| + | :Good. | ||
Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year. The Packers, admittedly were the finest players. Just joking-nobody around here doubts that the Giants are the greatest team ever! | Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year. The Packers, admittedly were the finest players. Just joking-nobody around here doubts that the Giants are the greatest team ever! | ||
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All the mistakes in this will be caught by me this time. Do you think this work is something to be embarrassed about? | All the mistakes in this will be caught by me this time. Do you think this work is something to be embarrassed about? | ||
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| + | :Good again. | ||
James is most proud of the homework that had the fewest errors, of course! The final sentence, and the one before it; they were perfect. | James is most proud of the homework that had the fewest errors, of course! The final sentence, and the one before it; they were perfect. | ||
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| + | :A colon rather than a semicolon near the end. Minus 1. | ||
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| + | :58/60. Good work.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 09:50, 16 February 2012 (EST) | ||
Handed essay in at class | Handed essay in at class | ||
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| + | :OK. | ||
AranM | AranM | ||
Revision as of 14:50, February 16, 2012
Part A: Correct [the] errors in the following:
God given rights belong to all of us, other than us, whom else would he give them to?
- Need hyphen: "God-given". Also, "to whom else ..." Minus 1.
“I [am not] missing that game again”, I told him. After all, their friend was at the game and there was no way I was going to miss it.
- OK.
When a stranger came and sought directions, I told him to not to bother my friend and me.
- Good.
Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year. The Packers, admittedly were the finest players. Just joking-nobody around here doubts that the Giants are the greatest team ever!
- Good.
All the mistakes in this will be caught by me this time. Do you think this work is something to be embarrassed about?
- Good again.
James is most proud of the homework that had the fewest errors, of course! The final sentence, and the one before it; they were perfect.
- A colon rather than a semicolon near the end. Minus 1.
- 58/60. Good work.--Andy Schlafly 09:50, 16 February 2012 (EST)
Handed essay in at class
- OK.
AranM