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2.  I looked at the evolutionists versions and there were many statements uncited by footnotes.
 
2.  I looked at the evolutionists versions and there were many statements uncited by footnotes.
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3.  I have looked at Ray Martinez's work in the past and I know that he can produce good work. However, I looked at Ray Martinez's version briefly and immediately ran across unencyclopedic language.  For example, I found this unencyclopedic:  A critical view of Darwinists '''in sheeps clothing'''   I also think you should have used footnotes instead of a bibliography since the evo/creo issue can be contentious.
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3.  I have looked at creationists Ray Martinez's work in the past and I know that he can produce good work. However, I looked at Ray Martinez's version briefly and immediately ran across unencyclopedic language.  For example, I found this unencyclopedic:  A critical view of Darwinists '''in sheeps clothing'''     I also think you should have used footnotes instead of a bibliography since the evo/creo issue can be contentious.
    
4.  I don't think theistic evolution should be such a contentious issue as far as what it is if you stick to the facts. I suggest the two diametrically opposed sides stick to the facts and scrupuously footnote this article since it is becoming contentious.   
 
4.  I don't think theistic evolution should be such a contentious issue as far as what it is if you stick to the facts. I suggest the two diametrically opposed sides stick to the facts and scrupuously footnote this article since it is becoming contentious.   
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