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:You did more than just that. [[User:VargasMilan|VargasMilan]] 23:47, 11 June 2015 (EDT)
:You did more than just that. [[User:VargasMilan|VargasMilan]] 23:47, 11 June 2015 (EDT)
==Change the article==
As it stands, the article itself is confusing. Items of info were placed in a haphazard manner, without regard to structure or flow. Try re-doing it this way, in the following order:
:Do a simple statement to introduce the subject in the first paragraph.
:Describe in detail what it is, and what it supposed to do.
:Describe the history of it, who first postulated it and why; who else seconded it.
:Describe anything that successfully uses it, confirms it, and so on.
:Describe anything the rejects it, criticisms of it, proof that it is wrong, and so on. It could be proof that it is wrong only in specific applications where it was tried and failed. [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] 00:00, 15 June 2015 (EDT)