Too many proper nouns. A headline reader cannot determine what the subject is. You may know what it is, but the reader doesn't have the time. Even in article writing, sometimes the number of proper nouns in one sentence needs to be pared down for the readers, sake so they can determine what the subject is.
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Too many proper nouns. A headline reader cannot determine what the subject is. You may know what it is, but the reader doesn't have the time. Even in article writing, sometimes the number of proper nouns in one sentence needs to be pared down for the readers sake, so they can determine what the subject is.
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