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The article [https://thenationalpulse.com/news/the-smartest-man-in-the-world-iq-200-is-convinced-the-u-s-election-was-stolen/] says that his name is Chris Langan. [[User:Presidentofyes12|Presidentofyes12]]<sup>[[User talk:Presidentofyes12|MJ WAS ]][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qC8O2X9L0Zw PRO-LIFE]</sup> 09:22, 30 December 2020 (EST)
 
The article [https://thenationalpulse.com/news/the-smartest-man-in-the-world-iq-200-is-convinced-the-u-s-election-was-stolen/] says that his name is Chris Langan. [[User:Presidentofyes12|Presidentofyes12]]<sup>[[User talk:Presidentofyes12|MJ WAS ]][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qC8O2X9L0Zw PRO-LIFE]</sup> 09:22, 30 December 2020 (EST)
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==Proper nouns==
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*"Trump describes Never-Trumper, Pelosi-supporter Liz Cheney (R-WY)
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Too many proper nouns. A headline reader cannot determine what the subject is. You may know what it is, but the reader doesn't have the time.  Even in article writing, sometimes the number of proper nouns in one sentence needs to be pared down for the readers, sake so they can determine what the subject is.
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Assume the reader knows, or they can click to find out.  [[User:RobSmith|RobS]]<sup>[[User talk:RobSmith|Free Kyle!]]</sup> 12:18, 28 April 2021 (EDT)
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