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This whole project is a travesty. I've never been accused of being a liberal, but I can't beileve any educated, honest person would support this project. I don't understand how this project's critics can take it so seriously. Im sure you've all read the article on evolution. Like I said before the creators and supporters of this project are embarrassing themselves. - [[User:Jirt|Jirt]] 20:28, 14 March 2007 (EDT)
 
This whole project is a travesty. I've never been accused of being a liberal, but I can't beileve any educated, honest person would support this project. I don't understand how this project's critics can take it so seriously. Im sure you've all read the article on evolution. Like I said before the creators and supporters of this project are embarrassing themselves. - [[User:Jirt|Jirt]] 20:28, 14 March 2007 (EDT)
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== spent time proofreading ==
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I received a short note regarding this article concerning some suggested improvements in grammar among other things.  I was a writing tutor at a university so I did some proofreading and found some areas where the article could be improved.  If anyone has any further input regarding this matter your comments here would be appreciated. [[User:Conservative|Conservative]] 02:55, 15 March 2007 (EDT)conservative
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