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:If you please, write here your proposal for how this should be written, including the source links.  If Obama lobbied heavily for the moritorium to lapse, then the source evidence will say it; if he was a part of a coalition of people, then again the evidence will support that.  Since this article is about Obama, it should lean on what he has done while in office.  But as far as what the 110th Congress did or didn't do, oh yes, I am in total agreement with you...and so were the vast majority of voters back in November. [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] 20:00, 3 January 2011 (EST)
 
:If you please, write here your proposal for how this should be written, including the source links.  If Obama lobbied heavily for the moritorium to lapse, then the source evidence will say it; if he was a part of a coalition of people, then again the evidence will support that.  Since this article is about Obama, it should lean on what he has done while in office.  But as far as what the 110th Congress did or didn't do, oh yes, I am in total agreement with you...and so were the vast majority of voters back in November. [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] 20:00, 3 January 2011 (EST)
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::He didn't, as far as I know, or have ever read.  I don't think any articles arguing that he soley was responsible, or even more responsible than any other rep, exist.  The text is already up there.  Pretty vanilla.  Mentions him by name, but also says, "hey, don't forget about all the other chair-jockeys, too!"  But the article is about him, so he gets a name drop for focus.  The article is about him as whole, so his Presidential and Senatorial terms would be seperate sections of the same article, so as not to confuse.  The 110th was the last Bush-era Congress.  In November, we voted out the 111th.  We are now in the 112th Congress. 
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::Oh, I also replaced someone's citation from an OpEd piece in the NYTimes with an actual news reference that supported the same point (about the Obama administrations poor response to the Oil Spill).  If I didn't know better (and I probably don't), I would suspect that some of the citations here are purposefully planted just to make us look like simpletons.  [[User:RyanDav|RyanDav]] 21:39, 3 January 2011 (EST)
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