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Chapter 5; grammar and punctuation; translated verses 6, 16 and 22
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|That thou mayest regard discretion, and that thy lips may keep knowledge.  
 
|That thou mayest regard discretion, and that thy lips may keep knowledge.  
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|so that you highly regard discretion and so your lips keep knowledge.
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|So that you highly regard discretion and so your lips keep knowledge.
 
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|For the lips of a strange woman drop as an honeycomb, and her mouth is smoother than oil:  
 
|For the lips of a strange woman drop as an honeycomb, and her mouth is smoother than oil:  
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|the lips of a strange woman is like a honeycomb, her mouth is smoother then oil:
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|The lips of a strange woman are like a honeycomb, her mouth is smoother then oil:
 
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|But her end is bitter as wormwood, sharp as a twoedged sword.  
 
|But her end is bitter as wormwood, sharp as a twoedged sword.  
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|but the result is bitter like poison wormwood, as sharp as a double-edged sword.
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|But the result is bitter like poison wormwood, as sharp as a double-edged sword.
 
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|Her feet go down to death; her steps take hold on hell.  
 
|Her feet go down to death; her steps take hold on hell.  
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|Her feet go down to death and her steps take hold in hell.
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|Her feet go down to death, and her steps take hold in hell.
 
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|Lest thou shouldest ponder the path of life, her ways are moveable, that thou canst not know them.  
 
|Lest thou shouldest ponder the path of life, her ways are moveable, that thou canst not know them.  
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|If you ponder the path of life, it will move, and you cannot know it.
 
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|Remove thy way far from her, and come not nigh the door of her house:  
 
|Remove thy way far from her, and come not nigh the door of her house:  
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|make your way far from her ways and don't come close to her house,
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|Make your way far from her ways and don't come close to her house,
 
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|Lest thou give thine honour unto others, and thy years unto the cruel:  
 
|Lest thou give thine honour unto others, and thy years unto the cruel:  
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|dont give your honour to others, or your years to the cruel,
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|Don't give your honor to others, or your years to the cruel,
 
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|Lest strangers be filled with thy wealth; and thy labours be in the house of a stranger;  
 
|Lest strangers be filled with thy wealth; and thy labours be in the house of a stranger;  
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|let not strangers be filled with your wealth or your labours be in the house of a stranger,  
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|Let not strangers be filled with your wealth or your labors be in the house of a stranger,  
 
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|And thou mourn at the last, when thy flesh and thy body are consumed,  
 
|And thou mourn at the last, when thy flesh and thy body are consumed,  
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|And you mourn at the last, when your flesh and body are consumed.
 
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|And say, How have I hated instruction, and my heart despised reproof;  
 
|And say, How have I hated instruction, and my heart despised reproof;  
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|and say, i have hated instructions and my heart despised correction,
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|And say, I have hated instructions and my heart despised correction,
 
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|And have not obeyed the voice of my teachers, nor inclined mine ear to them that instructed me!  
 
|And have not obeyed the voice of my teachers, nor inclined mine ear to them that instructed me!  
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|i have not obeyed the voice of my teachers not not listened with my ear to them that instructed me!
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|I have not obeyed the voice of my teachers nor have I listened with my ear to those who instructed me!
 
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|Let thy fountains be dispersed abroad, and rivers of waters in the streets.  
 
|Let thy fountains be dispersed abroad, and rivers of waters in the streets.  
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|Let your fountains be separated abroad, and rivers of waters in the street 
 
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|Let them be only thine own, and not strangers' with thee.  
 
|Let them be only thine own, and not strangers' with thee.  
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|let them be only your own and not with strangers.
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|Let them be only your own and not with strangers.
 
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|Let her be as the loving hind and pleasant roe; let her breasts satisfy thee at all times; and be thou ravished always with her love.  
 
|Let her be as the loving hind and pleasant roe; let her breasts satisfy thee at all times; and be thou ravished always with her love.  
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|let her be as the loving hind and the pleasant roe, let her breasts satisfy you at all times, be ravished always always with her love
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|Let her be as the loving hind and the pleasant roe, let her breasts satisfy you at all times, be ravished always always with her love.
 
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|And why wilt thou, my son, be ravished with a strange woman, and embrace the bosom of a stranger?  
 
|And why wilt thou, my son, be ravished with a strange woman, and embrace the bosom of a stranger?  
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|and will you, my son, be ravished with a strange woman and embrace the bosom of a stranger?
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|And will you, my son, be ravished with a strange woman and embrace the bosom of a stranger?
 
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|His own iniquities shall take the wicked himself, and he shall be holden with the cords of his sins.  
 
|His own iniquities shall take the wicked himself, and he shall be holden with the cords of his sins.  
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|His own wrongdoings will take the wicked himself, and he will be tied in his own sins.
 
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