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Talk:Essay:Declaration of Independence from Liberalism (view source)
Revision as of 21:24, March 5, 2016
, 21:24, March 5, 2016Nice! A few suggestions...
==Thanks! Just a few thoughts:==
Interesting article--thanks!
Just a few thoughts for improvement: Might you want to bullet-point each entry? If so, just place an asterisk (*) at the beginning of each line before each item. Also, it's a little hard to tell the quotes from the explanations. I'll probably add regular quote marks for you, but you can also use <nowiki>{{cquote|Quote goes here}} </nowiki> to make quotes appear like bellow, if you prefer.
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Again, nice job! --[[User:DavidB4|David B]] ([[User talk:DavidB4|talk]]) 16:24, 5 March 2016 (EST)
Interesting article--thanks!
Just a few thoughts for improvement: Might you want to bullet-point each entry? If so, just place an asterisk (*) at the beginning of each line before each item. Also, it's a little hard to tell the quotes from the explanations. I'll probably add regular quote marks for you, but you can also use <nowiki>{{cquote|Quote goes here}} </nowiki> to make quotes appear like bellow, if you prefer.
{{cquote|Quote goes here}}
Again, nice job! --[[User:DavidB4|David B]] ([[User talk:DavidB4|talk]]) 16:24, 5 March 2016 (EST)