Just a few thoughts for improvement: Might you want to bullet-point each entry? If so, just place an asterisk (*) at the beginning of each line before each item. Also, it's a little hard to tell the quotes from the explanations. I'll probably add regular quote marks for you, but you can also use <nowiki>{{cquote|Quote goes here}} </nowiki> to make quotes appear like bellow, if you prefer.
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Just a few thoughts for improvement: Might you want to bullet-point each entry? If so, just place an asterisk (*) at the beginning of each line before each item. Also, citations would be agood idea to prove that what you say is true, and give credit to others if you got the info from them