Just a few thoughts for improvement: Might you want to bullet-point each entry? If so, just place an asterisk (*) at the beginning of each line before each item. Also, citations would be agood idea to prove that what you say is true, and give credit to others if you got the info from them | Just a few thoughts for improvement: Might you want to bullet-point each entry? If so, just place an asterisk (*) at the beginning of each line before each item. Also, citations would be agood idea to prove that what you say is true, and give credit to others if you got the info from them |