:His old version has that same style of writing that says nothing, despite having lots of words. It doesn't tell the reader anything.--[[User:JoyousOne|JoyousOne]] 09:13, 26 April 2007 (EDT) | :His old version has that same style of writing that says nothing, despite having lots of words. It doesn't tell the reader anything.--[[User:JoyousOne|JoyousOne]] 09:13, 26 April 2007 (EDT) |