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Line 23: + + − − With all the news about Harold Camping, I decided to visit the CP page about the Rapture. After reading it, I noticed a few things: (1) Three independent lead-in paragraphs, (2) an intro section that is far longer than the remainder of the article, and (3) a lack of flow from one thought to another. Because of this, I have tried to restructure the article with better subheadings. I haven't changed the content too much but I believe the article deserves a better arrangement of ideas than what existed before. And JonG, yes, I have added a brief reference as well. [[User:Michael4|Michael4]] 00:42, 22 May 2011 (EDT)
→Restructuring the article: Switch to chronological order.
==Restructuring the article==
==Restructuring the article==
With all the news about Harold Camping, I decided to visit the CP page about the Rapture. After reading it, I noticed a few things: (1) Three independent lead-in paragraphs, (2) an intro section that is far longer than the remainder of the article, and (3) a lack of flow from one thought to another. Because of this, I have tried to restructure the article with better subheadings. I haven't changed the content too much but I believe the article deserves a better arrangement of ideas than what existed before. And JonG, yes, I have added a brief reference as well. [[User:Michael4|Michael4]] 00:42, 22 May 2011 (EDT)
Still too many lead-in paragraphs. The biggest problem is that the entire article is written from a post-tribulation or pre-wrath perspective. There needs to be less bias in the lead-in and sections for Pre-Trib pro and con and Pre-wrath/post-trib pro and con. [[User:Olec|Olec]] 17:37 21 March 2017 (EDT)
Still too many lead-in paragraphs. The biggest problem is that the entire article is written from a post-tribulation or pre-wrath perspective. There needs to be less bias in the lead-in and sections for Pre-Trib pro and con and Pre-wrath/post-trib pro and con. [[User:Olec|Olec]] 17:37 21 March 2017 (EDT)