I'm not really involved in it, but I just want to put in my two cents anyway. Firstly, the Breitbart article seems very relevant--I could be missing something, but I don't see a reason to challenge it as a reference. As for the wording--I don't know that it much matters. We don't want to be overly verbose, but we also should make the reader jump to conclusions. Federal law is implied, but it could be understood as state law if we do not clarify that point sufficiently. I hope you can agree on a solution. Talking on something other that edit summaries of reversions might be a god idea also. To me, either attempted version of that point seems suitable. Perhaps efforts would better be focused on other topics. What about an article on James Hodgkinson? We don't want to start writing before we know the facts, but some information is already available. (For example, we now know he was a liberal). <br /> | I'm not really involved in it, but I just want to put in my two cents anyway. Firstly, the Breitbart article seems very relevant--I could be missing something, but I don't see a reason to challenge it as a reference. As for the wording--I don't know that it much matters. We don't want to be overly verbose, but we also should make the reader jump to conclusions. Federal law is implied, but it could be understood as state law if we do not clarify that point sufficiently. I hope you can agree on a solution. Talking on something other that edit summaries of reversions might be a god idea also. To me, either attempted version of that point seems suitable. Perhaps efforts would better be focused on other topics. What about an article on James Hodgkinson? We don't want to start writing before we know the facts, but some information is already available. (For example, we now know he was a liberal). <br /> |