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School is a very boring things for kids. Research and surveys have suggested that kids are tired and bored during school. This is also shown in popular media and our culture. We see in some T.V. shows that kids fall asleep during the school days. This is very true in real life. According to John Taylor Gato; a very popular former school teacher, school is not a benefit for children. School hurts the minds of the children that attend it. This is proven to be true when we see that more schooling in  a place causes more depression in the people attending it. Less school makes children happier as we can see in Finland. Finland has the best educational system in our modern world. Kids there are much happier and have less depression. According to the youtuber called red pill philosophy, adhd was a  disease that was invented by the government schooling. He says that kids are so bored and when they complain many schools/doctors suggest that they go and take medications. This is a bad idea because kids are bored because they are looking for a challenge and they are wanting to find something that will satisfy their desire to have something fun.  Medicine will just calm them down, but it will destroy the potential of the child to find their passions. Please do not let your children take medicine and thanks for reading.

School is a very boring things for kids. Research and surveys have suggested that kids are tired and bored during school. This is also shown in popular media and our culture. We see in some T.V. shows that kids fall asleep during the school days. This is very true in real life. According to John Taylor Gato; a very popular former school teacher, school is not a benefit for children. School hurts the minds of the children that attend it. This is proven to be true when we see that more schooling in  a place causes more depression in the people attending it. Less school makes children happier as we can see in Finland. Finland has the best educational system in our modern world. Kids there are much happier and have less depression. According to the youtuber called red pill philosophy, adhd was a  disease that was invented by the government schooling. He says that kids are so bored and when they complain many schools/doctors suggest that they go and take medications. This is a bad idea because kids are bored because they are looking for a challenge and they are wanting to find something that will satisfy their desire to have something fun.  Medicine will just calm them down, but it will destroy the potential of the child to find their passions. Please do not let your children take medicine and thanks for reading.