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please reword it
The article gives the impression of being written to excite disgust or revulsion. Words like 'carcass', etc. Is someone trying to send a subtle message here? --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] 12:26, 24 May 2007 (EDT)
The article gives the impression of being written to excite disgust or revulsion. Words like 'carcass', etc. Is someone trying to send a subtle message here? --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] 12:26, 24 May 2007 (EDT)
I've been accused of many things but subtle I ain't! ; P I can remove them or rephrase them if you prefer but it's pretty standard terminology when talking about cuts of meat. [[User:Fingermouse|Fingermouse]] 12:31, 24 May 2007 (EDT)
:I've been accused of many things but subtle I ain't! ; P I can remove them or rephrase them if you prefer but it's pretty standard terminology when talking about cuts of meat. [[User:Fingermouse|Fingermouse]] 12:31, 24 May 2007 (EDT)
::Can you reword it so the reader would ''like'' to eat pork? --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] 12:32, 24 May 2007 (EDT)