:Umm, yes? Meaning what? That nobody else can edit it? That the (non-proper) noun "clergy" should be spelt with a capital "C"? That the same applies for "military junta"? That "monks" should not be linked? That there should be no mention of the death of the Japanese journalist? That the "it" that I replaced with "the violence" should actually refer to nothing in particular? That it should be written from an American POV? That's China's comments on the situation shouldn't be there? Etc., etc.? | :Umm, yes? Meaning what? That nobody else can edit it? That the (non-proper) noun "clergy" should be spelt with a capital "C"? That the same applies for "military junta"? That "monks" should not be linked? That there should be no mention of the death of the Japanese journalist? That the "it" that I replaced with "the violence" should actually refer to nothing in particular? That it should be written from an American POV? That's China's comments on the situation shouldn't be there? Etc., etc.? |