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The total number of votes cast by Obama is meaningless, since the vast majority of them would be on non-controversial issues.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 15:08, 30 January 2008 (EST)
 
The total number of votes cast by Obama is meaningless, since the vast majority of them would be on non-controversial issues.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 15:08, 30 January 2008 (EST)
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:Not a problem; I was just trying to add a bit of perspective to the point.  However, you might want to reconsider or reformulate the second part of the paragraph (which you also reverted).  It's unclear who exactly "opponent" refers to--I understand it means Jack Ryan, but Obama's main Dem primary rival came to a similar end (dropped out of the race when details of his divorce became public).  Further, readers might recall that Obama defeated Alan Keyes in the general election and wrongly believe the sexual allegations refer to him.  Hence, my phrasology of "initial Republican" and "dropped out".  Also, thanks for (re)clarifying the research citation.--[[User:RossC|RossC]] 17:12, 30 January 2008 (EST)
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