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The total number of votes cast by Obama is meaningless, since the vast majority of them would be on non-controversial issues.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 15:08, 30 January 2008 (EST)
 
The total number of votes cast by Obama is meaningless, since the vast majority of them would be on non-controversial issues.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 15:08, 30 January 2008 (EST)
 
:Not a problem; I was just trying to add a bit of perspective to the point.  However, you might want to reconsider or reformulate the second part of the paragraph (which you also reverted).  It's unclear who exactly "opponent" refers to--I understand it means Jack Ryan, but Obama's main Dem primary rival came to a similar end (dropped out of the race when details of his divorce became public).  Further, readers might recall that Obama defeated Alan Keyes in the general election and wrongly believe the sexual allegations refer to him.  Hence, my phrasology of "initial Republican" and "dropped out".  Also, thanks for (re)clarifying the research citation.--[[User:RossC|RossC]] 17:12, 30 January 2008 (EST)
 
:Not a problem; I was just trying to add a bit of perspective to the point.  However, you might want to reconsider or reformulate the second part of the paragraph (which you also reverted).  It's unclear who exactly "opponent" refers to--I understand it means Jack Ryan, but Obama's main Dem primary rival came to a similar end (dropped out of the race when details of his divorce became public).  Further, readers might recall that Obama defeated Alan Keyes in the general election and wrongly believe the sexual allegations refer to him.  Hence, my phrasology of "initial Republican" and "dropped out".  Also, thanks for (re)clarifying the research citation.--[[User:RossC|RossC]] 17:12, 30 January 2008 (EST)
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== "He has no clear personal achievement that cannot be explained as the likely result of affirmative action" ==
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Seems a little harsh (and uncited). Perhaps it should be reworded slightly? Perhaps his race is factor, but ''surely'' it's not implied that Obama entire life has consisted of coasting on a combination of his ethnicity and [[liberal]] [[affirmative action]]. [[User:Feebasfactor|Feebasfactor]] 22:28, 30 January 2008 (EST)
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