== "He has no clear personal achievement that cannot be explained as the likely result of affirmative action" ==
== "He has no clear personal achievement that cannot be explained as the likely result of affirmative action" ==
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Seems a little harsh (and uncited). Perhaps it should be reworded slightly? Perhaps his race is factor, but ''surely'' it's not implied that Obama entire life has consisted of coasting on a combination of his ethnicity and [[liberal]] [[affirmative action]]. [[User:Feebasfactor|Feebasfactor]] 22:28, 30 January 2008 (EST)
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Seems a little harsh (and uncited). Could it maybe be reworded slightly? His race is perhaps one factor, but ''surely'' it's not implied that Obama's entire life has consisted of coasting on a combination of his ethnicity and [[liberal]] [[affirmative action]]. [[User:Feebasfactor|Feebasfactor]] 22:28, 30 January 2008 (EST)