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Brown's religious experience is suspect, and, from the article, unclear. Again, what does he mean? Has he come to acknowledge Christ as Lord and Savior who as fully God and fully man died for the sins of the world and for him personally? Or has he merely reinforced ancient pagan fertility rights and decided to call that Christianity? The entire second paragraph is rather odd, and I would like to know its relevance. It explains little, and leaves more questions than it answers. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 01:04, 6 August 2008 (EDT)
Brown's religious experience is suspect, and, from the article, unclear. Again, what does he mean? Has he come to acknowledge Christ as Lord and Savior who as fully God and fully man died for the sins of the world and for him personally? Or has he merely reinforced ancient pagan fertility rights and decided to call that Christianity? The entire second paragraph is rather odd, and I would like to know its relevance. It explains little, and leaves more questions than it answers. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 01:04, 6 August 2008 (EDT)
:The words religious experience "that he says he had" should be changed to "apparent" because "that he says he had" is a phrase loaded against the author. Also, if it's an ALTERNATE history, and according to Microsoft Bookshelf the definition is "serving in place of another," then shouldn't it be redundant that it changes "much of the historical record?" The encyclopedia's job is not to form opinion, anyway. [[User:Jhan|Jhan]] 6 August 2008