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:The words religious experience "that he says he had" should be changed to "apparent" because "that he says he had" is a phrase loaded against the author. Also, if it's an ALTERNATE history, and according to Microsoft Bookshelf the definition is "serving in place of another," then shouldn't it be redundant that it changes "much of the historical record?" The encyclopedia's job is not to form opinion, anyway. [[User:Jhan|Jhan]] 6 August 2008
:The words religious experience "that he says he had" should be changed to "apparent" because "that he says he had" is a phrase loaded against the author. Also, if it's an ALTERNATE history, and according to Microsoft Bookshelf the definition is "serving in place of another," then shouldn't it be redundant that it changes "much of the historical record?" The encyclopedia's job is not to form opinion, anyway. [[User:Jhan|Jhan]] 6 August 2008
::The words you are using have a tendency to dilute meaning. Alternative can be similar or it can be directly conflicting. That it is directly conflicting is noteworthy. Unless we have further information by what Brown means by a religious experience, then his claim is suspect as stated above based upon the strong opposing position he takes to Christian theology. It is not apparent that he had a religious experience, only that he claimed such. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 12:01, 6 August 2008 (EDT)