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[[User:Forwearemany|Forwearemany]] 18:48, 16 August 2008 (EDT)
[[User:Forwearemany|Forwearemany]] 18:48, 16 August 2008 (EDT)
:Your early change seem appropriate; I would make some reference to ex-Duke instead of removing the knowledge that he was once a Duke. This is assuming you will provide sources. The Battle of the Orontes (I left out the word the) and the count at Ascalon are both discussed in the Encyclopedia of Military History. Also, the battles are discussed and do not match the changes that you state above. For instance in The Battle of Orontes, the Moslem army was defeated due to being hemmed in between the river and the nearby mountains from successful counterattacks by Bohemund after Kerboga's initial attacks were repulsed. Unable to maneuver or stand against the charge, where the Crusader armor certainly made them superior man for man, they broke and fled. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 14:11, 18 August 2008 (EDT)