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:Noting the tuition as it currently exists shows the standard of that school for today and leaves it to the reader to determine what may have held true in the past.  Generally speaking, most schools keep comparable standards over time.  If there was a scholarship, his website would proudly provide that information would they not?  Or have you noticed a tendency towards them being modest for Joe's accomplishments?  Leaving the summer job part without also including current tuition levels could make it sound as if he paid for it himself, which would appear to be unlikely, although we do not state one way or the other.  Giving more complete information, while not stating what occurred, can allow the reader to draw his own conclusions on how viable this may have been. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 16:53, 10 September 2008 (EDT)

:Noting the tuition as it currently exists shows the standard of that school for today and leaves it to the reader to determine what may have held true in the past.  Generally speaking, most schools keep comparable standards over time.  If there was a scholarship, his website would proudly provide that information would they not?  Or have you noticed a tendency towards them being modest for Joe's accomplishments?  Leaving the summer job part without also including current tuition levels could make it sound as if he paid for it himself, which would appear to be unlikely, although we do not state one way or the other.  Giving more complete information, while not stating what occurred, can allow the reader to draw his own conclusions on how viable this may have been. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 16:53, 10 September 2008 (EDT)