Changes

1) "Obama and Elitism" plus "Obama and Islam" are not valid main introductory sections.  

1) "Obama and Elitism" plus "Obama and Islam" are not valid main introductory sections.  

2) His birth certificate gets its own section but his healthcare plans don't?

2) His birth certificate gets its own section but his healthcare plans don't?

3) The "Insights" section is just a list of criticisms and belongs under a "Criticism" section.

3) The "Insights" section is just a list of criticisms and belongs under a "Criticism" section.

4) Off-topic side-swipes: "He became a member of the Harvard Law Review, which uses racial quotas, in 1989". Why is "which uses racial quotas" in there? If it was a reason that he was chosen, say that. If it wasn't leave it out.

4) Off-topic side-swipes: "He became a member of the Harvard Law Review, which uses racial quotas, in 1989". Why is "which uses racial quotas" in there? If it was a reason that he was chosen, say that. If it wasn't leave it out.

5) Unsubstantiated claims: "Obama's campaign has been financed largely by leftist donors opposed to the war and to the American military in general." Citation definitely needed.

5) Unsubstantiated claims: "Obama's campaign has been financed largely by leftist donors opposed to the war and to the American military in general." Citation definitely needed.