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Voting Republican again this year. I know you're mad about what's going on, but it shows throughout the page. An encyclopedia can't be written from an angry point of view. Let me be specific:
 
Voting Republican again this year. I know you're mad about what's going on, but it shows throughout the page. An encyclopedia can't be written from an angry point of view. Let me be specific:
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1) "Obama and Elitism" plus "Obama and Islam" are not valid main introductory sections.  
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1) "Obama and Elitism" plus "Obama and Islam" are not valid main introductory sections. Start with his early life.
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2) His birth certificate gets its own section but his healthcare plans don't?
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2) His birth certificate gets its own section but his healthcare and tax plans don't? Focus on what's really important.
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3) The "Insights" section is just a list of criticisms and belongs under a "Criticism" section.
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3) The "Insights" section is just a list of criticisms and belongs under a "Criticism" section. Categorize corectly.
    
4) Off-topic side-swipes: "He became a member of the Harvard Law Review, which uses racial quotas, in 1989". Why is "which uses racial quotas" in there? If it was a reason that he was chosen, say that. If it wasn't leave it out.
 
4) Off-topic side-swipes: "He became a member of the Harvard Law Review, which uses racial quotas, in 1989". Why is "which uses racial quotas" in there? If it was a reason that he was chosen, say that. If it wasn't leave it out.
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