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Structure? It had structure.
:I fully endorse this new version. It is much more concise, better written overall, and its no longer a hodge-podge. -EternalCritic
:I fully endorse this new version. It is much more concise, better written overall, and its no longer a hodge-podge. -EternalCritic
I sometimes wonder why an article of only about 400 words needs "structure". In this case, it had structure (unlike the old version)...just not the super-bold headings screaming at you every 4 or 5 lines. It can be useful in a long involved article, but I think not necessary in something that is less that a Word document long. It's copying WP.
:: Carthaginian navies did not control the Mediterranean sea (sic). They controlled the ''Western '' Mediterranean (which is stated in the preceding paragraph). The Greeks, Egyptians, the powerful trading states of the Levant, and then the successor states of Alexander had a big say in the Aegean and eastern Med., That was their turf. [[User:AlanE|AlanE]] 13:56, 24 October 2008 (EDT)