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I sometimes wonder why an article of only about 400 words needs "structure". In this case, it had structure (unlike the old version)...just not the super-bold headings screaming at you every 4 or 5 lines. It can be useful in a long involved article, but I think not necessary in something that is less that a Word document long. It's copying WP.
I sometimes wonder why an article of only about 400 words needs "structure". In this case, it had structure (unlike the old version)...just not the super-bold headings screaming at you every 4 or 5 lines. It can be useful in a long involved article, but I think not necessary in something that is less that a Word document long. It's copying WP.
:: Carthaginian navies did not control the Mediterranean sea (sic). They controlled the ''Western '' Mediterranean (which is stated in the preceding paragraph). The Greeks, Egyptians, the powerful trading states of the Levant, and then the successor states of Alexander had a big say in the Aegean and eastern Med., That was their turf. [[User:AlanE|AlanE]] 13:56, 24 October 2008 (EDT)
:: Carthaginian navies did not control the Mediterranean sea (sic). They controlled the ''Western '' Mediterranean (which is stated in the preceding paragraph). The Greeks, Egyptians, the powerful trading states of the Levant, and then the successor states of Alexander had a big say in the Aegean and eastern Med., That was their turf. [[User:AlanE|AlanE]] 13:56, 24 October 2008 (EDT)
::: If you see updates you can make, then do so. That's the advantage of pooling knowledge and working together. I should point out there is a difference between navy commerce and military control. You may rework the wording as you see fit to show both aspects. As far as sections, they are generally the direction that the site goes with articles that can be broken in that fashion. There's no hard and fast rule as to what length that should take place, but remember also that we want our articles to be read by our target audience -- and that does include keeping their attention when they first bring up the page. In any case, there is certainly no insult meant when sections are added. It is not a commentary on your work or what you have provided, merely a choice in layout. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 14:20, 24 October 2008 (EDT)