Changes

::: If you see updates you can make, then do so.  That's the advantage of pooling knowledge and working together.  I should point out there is a difference between navy commerce and military control.  You may rework the wording as you see fit to show both aspects. As far as sections, they are generally the direction that the site goes with articles that can be broken in that fashion.  There's no hard and fast rule as to what length that should take place, but remember also that we want our articles to be read by our target audience -- and that does include keeping their attention when they first bring up the page.  In any case, there is certainly no insult meant when sections are added.  It is not a commentary on your work or what you have provided, merely a choice in layout. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 14:20, 24 October 2008 (EDT)

::: If you see updates you can make, then do so.  That's the advantage of pooling knowledge and working together.  I should point out there is a difference between navy commerce and military control.  You may rework the wording as you see fit to show both aspects. As far as sections, they are generally the direction that the site goes with articles that can be broken in that fashion.  There's no hard and fast rule as to what length that should take place, but remember also that we want our articles to be read by our target audience -- and that does include keeping their attention when they first bring up the page.  In any case, there is certainly no insult meant when sections are added.  It is not a commentary on your work or what you have provided, merely a choice in layout. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 14:20, 24 October 2008 (EDT)