2,014
edits
Changes
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
Line 882:
Line 882: + + + + + + + +
Talk:Barack Hussein Obama (view source)
Revision as of 19:17, November 5, 2008
, 19:17, November 5, 2008→Copyediting needed: new section
I really think that this should be reworded in to prose and that it needs to be below the TOC.--[[User:Brendanw|Brendanw]] 13:46, 5 November 2008 (EST)
I really think that this should be reworded in to prose and that it needs to be below the TOC.--[[User:Brendanw|Brendanw]] 13:46, 5 November 2008 (EST)
== Copyediting needed ==
I know that updating things like this as the news changes is tough, but:
"Barack Hussein Obama II (born in Honolulu,[1][2] August 4, 1961), Democratic Party member, junior senator of the state of Illinois, and president-elect of the United States, winning the 2008 Election over Arizona Senator John McCain [3]."
is not a sentence... [[User:Human|Human]] 14:17, 5 November 2008 (EST)