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Talk:Barack Hussein Obama (view source)
Revision as of 19:27, November 5, 2008
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is not a sentence... [[User:Human|Human]] 14:17, 5 November 2008 (EST)
is not a sentence... [[User:Human|Human]] 14:17, 5 November 2008 (EST)
:I know they won't let me because I'm too new and can be a bit controversial, but I would love to rewrite the entire first paragraph. It has become such a muddled mess that it doesn't read well at all. [[User:EternalCritic|EternalCritic]] 14:27, 5 November 2008 (EST)