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Just some interesting points to consider. Perhaps we could open this up for discussion. --[[User:Economist|Economist]] 18:30, 6 January 2009 (EST)
 
Just some interesting points to consider. Perhaps we could open this up for discussion. --[[User:Economist|Economist]] 18:30, 6 January 2009 (EST)
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== I Know it's Obvious, But... ==
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This article should, at some point, actually say that Obama is African-American, making him the first black president.  If you really want to leave room for speculation about Warren G. Harding's ancestry, you could write "first openly black president" or something.  But Obama's blackness is clearly a large part of his personal and political identity, and is probably going to be remembered as one of the most historically significant aspects of this election.  An article on Barack Obama should contain a direct statement of this information, period.
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The editors should also consider putting that information in the first paragraph.  I understand that there is no established rule about the ordering of information in a Conservapedia article.  However, an uneducated reader looking at this article would learn how long his campaign was before learning that he is the first black president, which doesn't make much sense to me. [[User:Cb201|Cb201]] 16:20, 9 January 2009 (EST)
    
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