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, 23:19, January 12, 2009Disgraceful article
The editors should also consider putting that information in the first paragraph. I understand that there is no established rule about the ordering of information in a Conservapedia article. However, an uneducated reader looking at this article would learn how long his campaign was before learning that he is the first black president, which doesn't make much sense to me. [[User:Cb201|Cb201]] 16:20, 9 January 2009 (EST)
The editors should also consider putting that information in the first paragraph. I understand that there is no established rule about the ordering of information in a Conservapedia article. However, an uneducated reader looking at this article would learn how long his campaign was before learning that he is the first black president, which doesn't make much sense to me. [[User:Cb201|Cb201]] 16:20, 9 January 2009 (EST)
::The reader also gets to read a long list of "reasons" as to why Obama is likely a Muslim before even seeing the table of contents. But don't you worry, the reader will learn about the President-elect's African-American background later on in the article when it talks about affirmative action.
::This is Conservapedia -- a site that could have done Christianity and conservative values a whole lot of good, but at its present state, does to both far more harm instead. I do hope the owner of this site can see what it really is and make the necessary changes. [[User:AdamSchaley|AdamSchaley]] 18:18, 12 January 2009 (EST)
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