I am glad to see someone else editing this page now. I do have one question: Do you think "when the boy was just two years old" is encyclopedic in style? Perhaps "when the boy was two years old" might have a less emotive or editorial-essay tone? [[User:FOIA|FOIA]] 22:33, 18 May 2009 (EDT) | I am glad to see someone else editing this page now. I do have one question: Do you think "when the boy was just two years old" is encyclopedic in style? Perhaps "when the boy was two years old" might have a less emotive or editorial-essay tone? [[User:FOIA|FOIA]] 22:33, 18 May 2009 (EDT) |