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This article says a lot more about the person who wrote it than Che Guevara
This article says a lot more about the person who wrote it than Che Guevara
=="Rob"olution?==
In the first paragraph the text says "''Ernesto "Che" Guevara (b. June 14, 1928, died October 9th, 1967) was a sadistic Marxist guerrilla leader, with Fidel Castro, of the Cuban "Rob"olution and became a cultural icon for liberals, leftists, Communists, illegal aliens[1], and dumb white teenagers.[2]''"
Cuban "Rob"olution should be changed to Cuban Revolution as that is the historical name for that period of Cuban history and "Rob"olution isn't encyclopedic or professional sounding and comes off as the author's personal view rather then a historical descriptive term. I can see such a term in an 'essay' piece but not as an encyclopedic article. -- [[User:BMcP|BMcP]] 17:14, 23 June 2009 (EDT)