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::CP is not the venue for bitter theological disputes--and especially not for arguments that the Ten Commandments no longer apply. (for the record, my background is Roman Catholic) [[User:RJJensen|RJJensen]] 18:14, 10 July 2009 (EDT)
 
::CP is not the venue for bitter theological disputes--and especially not for arguments that the Ten Commandments no longer apply. (for the record, my background is Roman Catholic) [[User:RJJensen|RJJensen]] 18:14, 10 July 2009 (EDT)
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I notice I cannot edit this article, so I thought 'd just post this here - the sentence "This was later moved to 1844, but which also failed." is not very clear.  Perhaps "This was later changed to 1844, but his (the?) prophecy failed to come to pass", or somesuch wording might be a little clearer?  --[[User:KipDonner|KipDonner]] 18:56, 10 July 2009 (EDT)
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I notice I cannot edit this article, so I thought 'd just post this here - the sentence "This was later moved to 1844, but which also failed." is not very clear.  Perhaps "This was later changed to 1844, but his (the?) prophecy failed to come to pass", or somesuch wording might be a little clearer?   Also, "The chief proponent of this idea was Mrs. Ellen G. White, who along her husband James" needs the word "with" inserted between "along" and "her".   --[[User:KipDonner|KipDonner]] 18:56, 10 July 2009 (EDT)
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