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| | |Paul, a prisoner of Jesus Christ, and Timothy our brother, unto Philemon our dearly beloved, and fellow labourer, | | |Paul, a prisoner of Jesus Christ, and Timothy our brother, unto Philemon our dearly beloved, and fellow labourer, |
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| | |And to our beloved Apphia, and Archippus our fellow soldier, and to the church in thy house: | | |And to our beloved Apphia, and Archippus our fellow soldier, and to the church in thy house: |
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| | |Grace to you, and peace, from God our Father and the Lord Jesus Christ. | | |Grace to you, and peace, from God our Father and the Lord Jesus Christ. |
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| | |I thank my God, making mention of thee always in my prayers, | | |I thank my God, making mention of thee always in my prayers, |
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| | |Hearing of thy love and faith, which thou hast toward the Lord Jesus, and toward all saints; | | |Hearing of thy love and faith, which thou hast toward the Lord Jesus, and toward all saints; |
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| | |That the communication of thy faith may become effectual by the acknowledging of every good thing which is in you in Christ Jesus. | | |That the communication of thy faith may become effectual by the acknowledging of every good thing which is in you in Christ Jesus. |
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| | |For we have great joy and consolation in thy love, because the bowels of the saints are refreshed by thee, brother. | | |For we have great joy and consolation in thy love, because the bowels of the saints are refreshed by thee, brother. |
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| | |Wherefore, though I might be much bold in Christ to enjoin thee that which is convenient, | | |Wherefore, though I might be much bold in Christ to enjoin thee that which is convenient, |
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| | |Yet for love's sake I rather beseech thee, being such an one as Paul the aged, and now also a prisoner of Jesus Christ. | | |Yet for love's sake I rather beseech thee, being such an one as Paul the aged, and now also a prisoner of Jesus Christ. |
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| | |I beseech thee for my son Onesimus, whom I have begotten in my bonds: | | |I beseech thee for my son Onesimus, whom I have begotten in my bonds: |
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| | |Which in time past was to thee unprofitable, but now profitable to thee and to me: | | |Which in time past was to thee unprofitable, but now profitable to thee and to me: |
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| | |Whom I have sent again: thou therefore receive him, that is, mine own bowels: | | |Whom I have sent again: thou therefore receive him, that is, mine own bowels: |
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| | |Whom I would have retained with me, that in thy stead he might have ministered unto me in the bonds of the gospel: | | |Whom I would have retained with me, that in thy stead he might have ministered unto me in the bonds of the gospel: |
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| | |But without thy mind would I do nothing; that thy benefit should not be as it were of necessity, but willingly. | | |But without thy mind would I do nothing; that thy benefit should not be as it were of necessity, but willingly. |
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| | |For perhaps he therefore departed for a season, that thou shouldest receive him for ever; | | |For perhaps he therefore departed for a season, that thou shouldest receive him for ever; |
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| | |Not now as a servant, but above a servant, a brother beloved, specially to me, but how much more unto thee, both in the flesh, and in the Lord? | | |Not now as a servant, but above a servant, a brother beloved, specially to me, but how much more unto thee, both in the flesh, and in the Lord? |
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| | |If thou count me therefore a partner, receive him as myself. | | |If thou count me therefore a partner, receive him as myself. |
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| | |If he hath wronged thee, or oweth thee ought, put that on mine account; | | |If he hath wronged thee, or oweth thee ought, put that on mine account; |
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| | |I Paul have written it with mine own hand, I will repay it: albeit I do not say to thee how thou owest unto me even thine own self besides. | | |I Paul have written it with mine own hand, I will repay it: albeit I do not say to thee how thou owest unto me even thine own self besides. |
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| | |Yea, brother, let me have joy of thee in the Lord: refresh my bowels in the Lord. | | |Yea, brother, let me have joy of thee in the Lord: refresh my bowels in the Lord. |
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| | |Having confidence in thy obedience I wrote unto thee, knowing that thou wilt also do more than I say. | | |Having confidence in thy obedience I wrote unto thee, knowing that thou wilt also do more than I say. |
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| | |But withal prepare me also a lodging: for I trust that through your prayers I shall be given unto you. | | |But withal prepare me also a lodging: for I trust that through your prayers I shall be given unto you. |
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| | |There salute thee Epaphras, my fellow prisoner in Christ Jesus; | | |There salute thee Epaphras, my fellow prisoner in Christ Jesus; |
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| | |Marcus, Aristarchus, Demas, Lucas, my fellow labourers. | | |Marcus, Aristarchus, Demas, Lucas, my fellow labourers. |
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| | |The grace of our Lord Jesus Christ be with your spirit. Amen. | | |The grace of our Lord Jesus Christ be with your spirit. Amen. |
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